题目剖析:
图表里展示了1999年澳大利亚不同家庭类型的穷苦户比例。
household是家庭的意思;couple指一对夫妻或情侣;aged是年迈的; poverty是贫穷。
表格里六大家庭类型:single aged person(独居老年人); aged couple (老年夫妻); single, no children(无孩子独居成人); couple, no children(无孩子夫妻);sole parent(单亲S家庭);couple with children(有孩子夫妻)。把稳这里表格把老年人和相对年轻的成年人分开了,末了all households指所有家庭。
下面是官方范文:
The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.
Couples generally tend to be better off, with low poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.
Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).
Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.
范文一共5段:第1段先容table内容,第2段描述整体及两种只有一个成年人的家庭,第3段描述两种夫妻家庭,第4段描述两种老年家庭,第5段做整体总结比拟,下面是逐句剖析总结:
The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Note:
Breakdown:分类/明细
live in poverty:生活在穷苦,另一种说法是live under the poverty line (生活在穷苦线以下)
Family who were living in poverty: 生活在穷苦中的家庭 (who勾引的定于从句,先行词是family)
这是一个标准的小作文开头句。模板:The table gives a breakdown of different types of XX in XX (地区) in XXXX(年份). 表格列出了XX地区在XXXX年不同类型的XX的对应数据。
On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position.
Note:
这一句率先描述了总体均匀占比和人数,
On average: 均匀来看
comprise: 包含 分词形式comprising勾引分词短语作定语引出数量200万,并放在中间作为插入语,前后都要有逗号。
In this position: 在这种状态下(贫穷) position这里指状态
非常适用于开头同时描写所占百分比和确切数字。模板:On average, #% of XX, comprising ##, were in this position. 均匀来看,#%的XX,包含了##(数量),目前处于这种状态。
数量记得要加单位。
However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.
Note:
这一句做了比拟,利用%最高的两类与总%的关系(2倍)自然引出两类单身家庭(单亲和独居)。
However: 然而 作为比拟的过渡词
Those代指households, 现在分词consisting of勾引后置定语润色those
Double这里是adj.(形容词),指双倍的
With+数据 是小作文中常见的用法,放到结尾时前面要加逗号
Respectively: 分别的 常常加在几个数据后面,表示分别是。。。
模板:However, those consisting of XX or XX had almost double this proportion of ..., with #% and #% respectively. 然而,那些包含了XX和XX的群体大约是这部分。。。占比的两倍,分别为#%和#%。
Couples generally tend to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%).
Note:
这句用with勾引伴随状语,比较了有孩子和没孩子的夫妻家庭with lower ... for XX than XX 伴随着XX比XX更低的。。。(XX应为名词形式) 这是一个比较隧道高等的表达
be better of: 更富余
在一个种别后面直接加(),里面写明数据,这种先容数据的办法大略高效,一篇作文里可以利用1-2次。
模板:XX generally tend to be better off, with lower...for XX (#) than for XX (#). XX群体常日会更富余,XX的。。。(##)低于XX的。。。(##)。 开始的XX是个大类,里面包括两小类,先先容大类,然后比拟个中的两小类。
It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.
Note:
本句对刚描述过的4种家庭类型进行分类比拟(有孩子vs没孩子)
It is noticeable that... 值得把稳的是。。。
模板:It is noticeable that for XX, a higher than average proportion were...at this time. 值得把稳的是对付XX,此时。。。的占比高于均匀比例。
Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).
Note:
一句话解释并比拟了两种老年家庭的穷苦率,同时与前面做了比较。比较用到favour XX rather than XX的句式,这里favour是verb(动词),译为有利于。
Be less likely to: 不太可能
Once again: 再一次
Though: 虽然
Elderly: 年迈的
模板:XX were less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured XX (##) rather than XX (##). XX不太可能会贫穷,只管趋势再一次有利于XX(##)而非XX (##)。
Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.
Note:
末了一句总结,单身的家庭和有孩子的家庭普遍比夫妻家庭更可能穷。
Households of single adults 一人住户 = household consisting of only a single adult
Be more likely to: 更可能
模板:Overall the table suggests that XX and XX are more likely to... than...总的来说表格显示XX和XX比XX更可能。。。
表格题目的关键是用灵巧的句式、短语合营数据进行分类,比拟,总结。
写出高分英语作文不须要浏览很多范文,将同一类型几篇高质量范文剖析透彻,并能模拟运用就够了。花3天吃透1篇范文比1天浏览3篇范文更有效果。