·你为什么喜好这个节日
My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival, which is also known as the
Chinese New Year. We can do a lot of things during the holiday. It makes us happy. Here are the reasons
第一段，第一句改成: My favorite Chinese festival is the Chinese New Year——the Spring
Festival
First of all, during the Chinese New Year, people will have parties , where they can
enjoy many kinds（种类） of delicious foods. In addition, the Chinese New Year lasts（持续） for 15 days.
people can meet a lot of friends,which enriches（使丰富） our social（社交） life.
Last but not least, people will sing and dance and play games during the holiday.
As a result , as far as I am concerned , My favorite Chinese festival（节日） is the Spring Festival.
我最喜好的中国节日是春节，它也被称为春节
中国新年。我们可以在假期做很多事情。它使我们快乐。缘故原由如下
第一段，第一句改成:我最喜好的中国节日是中国新年——春节
首先，在中国新年期间，人们会举行聚会，在他们可以
享受各种美味的食品。此外，中国新年持续15天。
人们可以认识很多朋友，这丰富了我们的社交生活。末了但并非最不主要的是，人们会
在假期里唱歌、舞蹈和玩游戏。
因此，就我而言，我最喜好的中国节日是春节
