Everyone has to take on responsibility. A responsible person is ready to take on responsibility in critical situations and help achieve success.
每个人都该当承担任务。一个负任务的人时候准备着在危急情形下担负重任，并帮助获取成功。
As a responsible teenager, I try my best in everything that I am asked to do. Last term, I joined the English Drama Club.
作为一名有任务心的年轻人，我会尽力做好统统我该当做的每一件事情。上个学期，我参加了英语戏剧俱乐部。
The members were divided into different groups and each group acted out a story. I was asked to play a small role that had no lines. However, I took part in every rehearsal and watched others play attentively.
俱乐部成员被分为不同的几个小组，每个小组排练一个故事剧。我被安排担当了一个没有台词的小角色。然而，我参加了每一场彩排，并专注地不雅观看其他人的演出。
In the end, our performance was a great success, which I knew I had also contributed to.It’s the sense of responsibility that helps us do our work well.
终极，我们的演出得到了巨大的成功，我知道我也为这次成功演出做出了贡献。正是这种任务感帮助我们出色地完成了任务。
Everyone should try hard to play his own part well no matter how small the part is. Only when everyone does his part well can the whole team improve together and finally achieve success.
无论这个角色多么小，每个人都该当尽力扮演好自己的角色。只有每个人担当好自己的角色全体团队才能更好地改进事情，并终极得到成功。
[简评]
文章构造完全，层次清楚。其余，文章利用了定语从句、倒装句、强调句和让步状语从句。结尾部分写得很好。
[部分词汇]
rehearsal n. 彩排，练习
This is not a concert, but more of a rehearsal.
与其说这是一场音乐会，倒不如说是一次彩排。
responsibility n. 任务，职责
It's my responsibility to lock the doors.
我卖力锁门。
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